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Sujana

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  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: Insane

    I'll start this review with something I've just figured out while reading your work; I can't see the protagonist as 'insane'. I should be able to. I mean, he's killing ...

    Dec 13, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Kassie's Diary

    I've decided that instead of the standard model I usually use, I will just list the Top Three Things That You Might Need to Work On and the Top Three ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Theatre Re: Subject 34

    I have a mini black guy in the back of my head screaming various curses and slurs I am not allowed to write down professionally whenever I read something outstandingly ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Luna Stark

    This review would grow as long as the Yangtze river if I were to use my standard model, so instead I'll use an entirely different model for this one work: ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Old Friend

    So I realized from the very first lines I was going to like this story. The premise was enough to get it out of the 'meh' lists for me, so ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Art » General, General Re: Palace of Being

    I'm not sure how to judge this as it seems more...oblique about its purpose than usual, so I'll try my best to judge it as fairly as possible. From what ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: We Are

    I don't usually review poetry, but when I do, it's because I heard F. Scott Fitzgerald's name being used somewhere. Anyway, the compliments: I may be biased because I am ...

    Dec 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: perspective

    Hey! You're the one who made me fail my chemistry test! I promise this one will be shorter than the other, as I have little to work on (mostly because ...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    Okay, before I head into things: Is Aubrey's dad dead or missing? I mean, it should've been obvious from the title and how she speaks of him, but I have ...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Light in Her Eyes

    I'm not here to break anybody's heart, so I'll try to make this quick. Firstly, compliments: I did like how you characterized the main character in the beginning, especially with ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Loneliness on the Brink (But Still Not) of Solitude

    First, the compliments: For one, I can relate with the protagonist. I like how you don't directly state his name, setting him as a 'stranger' to the audience as well ...

    Dec 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: You Will Never Read My Letter

    I understand what audience this was meant for. I understand the person who was supposed to read this, and it really wasn't me. But if I were the audience you ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: (I'm putting 2 abecidarians in one because I need to sleep; you only need to edit one, please :))

    Honestly, I did like the idea of calling out people on their bullshit when it comes to sex workers and the sort. The abecedarian format weirded me out a little ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Death Sweeter Than Love

    Honestly, I didn't quite like this as much as I wanted to. I mean, it was much too dramatic for myself, as I'm a little too old for 'depressing teenage ...

    Dec 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Under New Stars

    I can't judge it as a whole, so I'll try to judge it from a sentence view. Overall, a nice, clever short read. If I were to read this from ...

    Dec 5, 2015


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