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Re: Insane
I'll start this review with something I've just figured out while reading your work; I can't see the protagonist as 'insane'. I should be able to. I mean, he's killing ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Kassie's Diary
I've decided that instead of the standard model I usually use, I will just list the Top Three Things That You Might Need to Work On and the Top Three ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Subject 34
I have a mini black guy in the back of my head screaming various curses and slurs I am not allowed to write down professionally whenever I read something outstandingly ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Luna Stark
This review would grow as long as the Yangtze river if I were to use my standard model, so instead I'll use an entirely different model for this one work: ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: My Old Friend
So I realized from the very first lines I was going to like this story. The premise was enough to get it out of the 'meh' lists for me, so ...
Dec 12, 2015 -
Re: Palace of Being
I'm not sure how to judge this as it seems more...oblique about its purpose than usual, so I'll try my best to judge it as fairly as possible. From what ...
Dec 10, 2015 -
Re: We Are
I don't usually review poetry, but when I do, it's because I heard F. Scott Fitzgerald's name being used somewhere. Anyway, the compliments: I may be biased because I am ...
Dec 9, 2015 -
Re: perspective
Hey! You're the one who made me fail my chemistry test! I promise this one will be shorter than the other, as I have little to work on (mostly because ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Abandoned
Okay, before I head into things: Is Aubrey's dad dead or missing? I mean, it should've been obvious from the title and how she speaks of him, but I have ...
Dec 8, 2015 -
Re: Light in Her Eyes
I'm not here to break anybody's heart, so I'll try to make this quick. Firstly, compliments: I did like how you characterized the main character in the beginning, especially with ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: Loneliness on the Brink (But Still Not) of Solitude
First, the compliments: For one, I can relate with the protagonist. I like how you don't directly state his name, setting him as a 'stranger' to the audience as well ...
Dec 7, 2015 -
Re: You Will Never Read My Letter
I understand what audience this was meant for. I understand the person who was supposed to read this, and it really wasn't me. But if I were the audience you ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: (I'm putting 2 abecidarians in one because I need to sleep; you only need to edit one, please :))
Honestly, I did like the idea of calling out people on their bullshit when it comes to sex workers and the sort. The abecedarian format weirded me out a little ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Death Sweeter Than Love
Honestly, I didn't quite like this as much as I wanted to. I mean, it was much too dramatic for myself, as I'm a little too old for 'depressing teenage ...
Dec 5, 2015 -
Re: Under New Stars
I can't judge it as a whole, so I'll try to judge it from a sentence view. Overall, a nice, clever short read. If I were to read this from ...
Dec 5, 2015
