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So, I just read chapter one and I really liked it. The plot line is great so far, but it seems like your getting a little ahead of yourself. I ...

This is an interesting beginning. I enjoyed reading this chapter because I can definitely relate to Sam. There are somethings that could uses some attention and editing. First things first, ...

I've heard grief expressed in a lot of ways and this poem is really original. There is always an empty space when you've lost someone you love, but I've never ...

Aleta, you've got some skills. This poem is marvelous. I love the imagery and the vivid descriptions. Your poem paints a picture of fun and cheeriness. I can imagine myself ...

I'm just going to go right into it. First of all, I'm not completely sure this can be categorized as an article or an essay. Articles and essays are based ...

This chapter was even better than chapter 1. Was that voice the spell caster from chapter 1? Is Faris supposed to be his new body? There are much fewer typos ...

Fantastic! Honestly, you're story is truly magnificent. Where did this idea come from? I've never heard of anything like it. I like the themes in this story and the magical ...

Nice note. I slightly agree. The formatting is what it is. I like your soliloquy. I was intrigued to read it. I didn't realize soliloquies were an option, although, of ...

Oh thank goodness! I like that you specify your rhyme pattern in the description. And you have really great rhythm. I've read so many poems who have no rhyme nor ...

Heya! So, this song seems pretty great over all, but I do have a few minor criticisms. For one thing, you really need consistency. I know, spelling probably won't make ...

Interesting song. I'm not sure if I am correct in interpretation, but I think that it means our lives are uncertain, but we can have dreams and we can carry ...

I like this poem. I approve of your word choice. Harbinger is an awesome word. I like the lines "A part of me dwells in the shadow a part of ...

Hey! Nice story. I do have a few comments to make though. The beginning is good, keeps you interested. It makes you wonder why the character is in so much ...

This really makes me wonder what's going on. Personally, I think that this is a good way to start a book. It captures your attention and it is very insightful ...

Where did these words come from exactly? I don't mean to insult your writing, I'm just confused. Are you sure bonfikify, torsugine, koronobite, and raggabon are actually words and are ...