StreetRat

No, she got it right, it's some things...

Horrible, yes, but it's alright, don't be sorry. Be happy, you wrote something beautiful. :D

Firestarter, thank you, and you're DOES sound like a song. Probably because it was, I just didn't know what to do with it, so yeah. I realized I placed it ...

Thank you all for your reviews, I really enjoyed reading them. Angel of Death, I know it was a bit choppy...hence the reason I put the extra 3 sentences...andthe fact ...

Almost the same exact thing happened to me. :O

Auteur: I know the opening line is long, but it's how I felt. The crime I commited, wasn't even a crime at all. It's just a guilty feeling of having ...

All of you--thanks for your nice words...and harsh criticism, but I'm pretty sure I've got this. I'm sorry that I'm not a writing major. But what I put into this ...

This is beautiful, and yes, you do have a good vocabulary. :)

Finding the words to describe onesself can be difficult, but you did it pretty well. Write on!

Every poem I've read of yours, has been amazing. And I love them all. Keep it up, dude. :)

Thank you both for your comments. I put the words "I might add" after "tragically" because I wasn't originally going to put the word "tragically" in there. You see what ...

This is completely beautiful. You are very talented. Keep up the good work!

Blackbird12, thank you for your encouraging comment. And Mandorelute, thank you for your criticism, although some felt like you were throwing salt on my raw flesh, but it's alright. I ...

Thank you very much for your comment. Don't worry, it's 1:30 here, haha. And, no, it was not a spacing mistake, it is isolated purposely. :)