StoryWeaver13

Actually, as for the English version, I've seen worse on the site that WEREN'T translated from Spanish. My (very) limited knowledge of Spanish helped to translate for the most part, ...

Well, I liked the beginning a lot more than the end. This is because the beginning opened so vividly, using imaginative and open-minded expression, but that raw emotion sort of ...

Well I kind of wish this ended a little more positively, or at least reflected a glimmer of positivity, but maybe that's just the blindly-optimistic side of me speaking. It ...

My main complaint is the lack of real emotion involved. It felt as though you were just bluntly stating things, rather than really putting that essential feeling into it. There ...

Well I like a lot of the wording that was used, it's really pretty and flowing and soft (like a lullaby). I don't have much in the way of improving ...

Well you said you wrote this in seventh grade, so it's an older poem, and I can sort of tell because I can see that some of the imagery and ...

Well I don't usually look at lyrics just because you can't hear them being played out, and melody and style can really impact the impression that your song has. I ...

Well it's an interesting piece I just have a couple nitpicks. My first thing is the repeating of the first line. On rare occasions this has a positive impact, but ...

Thanks for reviewing a piece of mine, time to return the favor! Anyway, this is a really great piece in my opinion. There was a lot of depth, and sometimes ...

Well, thanks for reviewing a piece of mine, so now it's time to return the favor! Anyway, I didn't expect to like this poem at all. Maybe it was my ...

Well, usually I don't like poems with this rhyme scheme just because it's so overdone, but it really was a pretty poem. At first I hadn't read that it was ...

Well, at first it was a little confusing, just because it was a lot of dialogue and you didn't really have time to get a hold of who these people ...

I think this is cool; it's really clever and well-written, and contains a lot of dramatic imagery that makes it stand out. The way you present it makes it really ...

I'm going to disagree with the first reviewer and might sound a bit harsh ONLY because I think there could be so much potential for an idea like this. So, ...

Honestly, I really really like this, even with my undying love for wolves. The way you worded with was just so intricate, it really captured my attention and the descriptions ...