StoryWeaver13

Wow, I felt like this was really personal, yet you definitely had a mature outlook on it too. Which is hard to do in situations like these. I definitely know ...

This broken girl Just trying to find Her place in this world I see her there everyday Okay, so this part through me for a loop because of lack of ...

This was a good read. It was simple but still held my attention with enough detail to make your characters feel 3-dimensional, and now you've got a pretty decent hook ...

Jesse James was never a fool, He could handle a gun like a thread on a spool. A gun crazed criminal the story is told, A pistol a nd hat ...

Well this was pretty good, but the real problem I had with this was that I just never felt like it completely came full-circle in what it was trying to ...

StoryWeaver, back for more, and no less happy than the first time. *Liked By this point I can't even find many faults, and I love that, because that means that ...

I loved it! I know you already have a first chapter out so I'll try to get to it the meantime, *liked. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Your ...

***Thoughts in BOLD , corrections in red . Emma quickly jumped out her room window, and she raced towards the park. She reached into her jacket, and pulled out her ...

Well I thought this was pretty good, but I felt like you were on the verge of developing this cool idea you had and you just didn't quite get to ...

What can I say but...I love this. And you made me cry a little again. :D Many Potter topics are trending on Twitter right now, and one of the most ...

*Hi! Corrections in red, suggestions in bold. Warning you - I'm feeling extremely nitpicky. ^_^ I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in ...

There are only two things I would change: -Name of this (sounds a little preachy) -How much you talk about God (not a bad thing - my reason for this ...

Well I finally get to read and review the second chapter of this! And I'm glad I finally did. :D Again, the tone of this is just classic (like reading ...

I don’t see the point , in believing. No I don’t see the point , in hoping. Oh I can’t see the point , in daring. With all your luck ...

This was really pretty, and overall I really liked this. My only problem is the fact that the rhyme scheme falls apart here and there around the middle. Words like ...