StoryWeaver13

This broken girl Just trying to find Her place in this world I see her there everyday Okay, so this part through me for a loop because of lack of ...

This was a good read. It was simple but still held my attention with enough detail to make your characters feel 3-dimensional, and now you've got a pretty decent hook ...

Jesse James was never a fool, He could handle a gun like a thread on a spool. A gun crazed criminal the story is told, A pistol a nd hat ...

Well this was pretty good, but the real problem I had with this was that I just never felt like it completely came full-circle in what it was trying to ...

StoryWeaver, back for more, and no less happy than the first time. *Liked By this point I can't even find many faults, and I love that, because that means that ...

I loved it! I know you already have a first chapter out so I'll try to get to it the meantime, *liked. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading. Your ...

***Thoughts in BOLD , corrections in red . Emma quickly jumped out her room window, and she raced towards the park. She reached into her jacket, and pulled out her ...

Well I thought this was pretty good, but I felt like you were on the verge of developing this cool idea you had and you just didn't quite get to ...

What can I say but...I love this. And you made me cry a little again. :D Many Potter topics are trending on Twitter right now, and one of the most ...

*Hi! Corrections in red, suggestions in bold. Warning you - I'm feeling extremely nitpicky. ^_^ I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in ...

There are only two things I would change: -Name of this (sounds a little preachy) -How much you talk about God (not a bad thing - my reason for this ...

Well I finally get to read and review the second chapter of this! And I'm glad I finally did. :D Again, the tone of this is just classic (like reading ...

I don’t see the point , in believing. No I don’t see the point , in hoping. Oh I can’t see the point , in daring. With all your luck ...

This was really pretty, and overall I really liked this. My only problem is the fact that the rhyme scheme falls apart here and there around the middle. Words like ...

My favorite part of this was the flow that you had, which was really solid. Sorry that I'm getting insanely tired of romance, especially in poetry, so I won't hover ...