Stormcrow

Interesting ideas about new leaders. I think this is a very good poem, although I would change some things. For example, I think you repeated lines too many times. If ...

nice

Wow! Nice! This is an interesting poem. I hope this isn't how you actually feel. I like how the rhyming sounds, although ABAB would have been better. Interesting way of ...

Thank you @therealme! I have but just didn't put anymore up. I'll do so then!

How many chapters is this? Its over 25 thousand words. I prefer 4-7 thousand words to a chapter, or around 20 standard pages. you?

Wow! Nice and vivid! And yes, the greenroom is kind of lonely. Haven't got any reviews get (just started). Is this really how you feel? If it is you could ...

Wow! Nice and vivid! And yes, the greenroom is kind of lonely. Haven't got any reviews get (just started). Is this really how you feel? If it is you could ...

Very nice! I find this funny. Its funny people think french is romantic. One of my friends speaks it. He'd probably know what that is.

I like the part about not saying you'd just bounce away. I got your reference to "I came in like a recking ball". Ha Ha! Very funny

good job

I think its a pretty good poem. The only reason being the format, although it could have been done better. Nice try. Would have been better if it rimed. I ...

I like the riming, however I prefer A,B,A,B,A

Cool! I really like this, especially at the end. More than alright leaves it hanging very well, and the use of sir gives me the feeling that a he is ...

arg. This isn't working. Sorry

Wow. Nice poem! I really liked the part about the screams. Interesting way of making hell seem less like the nether but more like some in us and around us. ...