Storm_Bringer

Umm if you want to delete this then there should be a X button on the top right of the box where the writing is. I think its around the ...

Well 'ello there! I will review your story for you! Its a classic orphanage/orphan thing is it? No matter, its all fine by me. It interesting, can't wait for the ...

Helleo! Thanks for the PM. Love the story so far! Okay onto the review! :) Demetre dressed slowly even though his head was spinning from all the questions he had. ...

Hello! I'm Storm, and I shall review this story today! :) pink flip-flops Does she wear shoes in her house? because i don't know anybody that does. She shook her ...

Yay! Chapter 5 is out. It was good but kinda short. Are you still going the two chapter per person thing? I'm guessing that the person Sean called was the ...

Hello again! Well this was an interesting continuation to chapter one. The only thing is that wouldn't the nurses think she's crazy because she keeps seeing things and talking to ...

Hiya!~ I liked this very much, although it's very short. Also I was a little confused when you started talking about all those guys. On to the nitpicks, though there ...

TJ: Wow! Since you said you liked poems so much i decided to check one out. Wow! I liked this, even if i didn't quite understand what it was about. ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. I'm Storm_Bringer and I shall review your story today. Every once in a while, he would stop, slump over the table, supported by his locked elbows, ...

Hello! Wow. This was interesting. The ghost and reading minds was cool. A few things though. Why is Courtney still so vibrant? She's dead and she knows she's dead but ...

Hello Wordartisan! This was good! You let us know more about Katie and Adrian. The only thing is that you should split the paragraphs up. They are kinda long in ...

Hey! Welcome! In_The_Moonlight is right you should do two reviews before you post anything. If you go to the Welcome forum and introduce yourself people there will explain all the ...

Hello! I like this story but the mom is really overprotective huh? Doesn't every kid have a bike? I don't get why the mom is all crazed. i like Theresa ...

Hey Meep! I think thedelphinater covered up the grammar stuff. I don't know why you said that this was horrible, i liked it. I hope you put more about Melody's ...

Hello Amon! I'm Storm and i shall review you story! I really liked this, the powers and two chapters per each person. Then everyone will come together at the house ...