Storm_Bringer

Hiya! Awww. This was a sweet short story. It was very cute. Music already found the grammer so nothing there. Although there wasn't much, so good job on that. :D ...

Hey Pringle. Here as you asked. :) Okay so I didn't read Lucyy's review so I'm super sorry if I repeat anything. Okay, this was pretty short but there were ...

Hey Amon. Wow. It took a while to give this one a review. Why is it your last chapter? I liked how it was moving along. I wanted to read ...

Hey Lauren! This was interesting. She is finally going to the city soon. Although, you say she is in a big rush to get packed and everything yet she goes ...

Hey. Welcome to YWS~ I shall review you story today. Just a few tips! -For every story post you must do two reviews. You can tell on your review count ...

WOw! I loved this! I love the Maximum Ride series and this was a really good fan fic. Who would have thought Iggy and Max? Its soo sad at the ...

Heya Rosie. Awesome story here. A couple of grammer mistakes that Colt didn't catch. “‘Watsa matter ‘Ren?” I said cheerfully to my older sister. You don't need this: ' after ...

Hey Stella! Well, this was interesting. Mary and Joseph huh? Now, what does that remind me of? Just kidding. Poor Michael. Mary gets over him pretty fast though. Some things ...

Hello Indigo! I'll review your story today! :) Awww. This is so sweet but sad. Is it a prologue of a story or just a piece you felt like writing? ...

Hiya Lydia! This story is good. I wonder why nobody else reviewed it yet. Although there isn't much to review. There were no grammer mistakes and the writing was good. ...

Hey Krupp! Well, I'm not much of a review on lyrics but I liked yours. Very worldly. Have you listened to "Where is the Love" by Black Eye Peas? It ...

Me too! All my friends are Twilight fanatics or weirdos as I like to call them. :) Sheesh. They talk about it EVERY day! I don't know what the big ...

Hiya! I'm Storm and I shall review your story for you. Though there is not much to review because Pippiedooda took it all! :x Hmph. JK. :) Anyways I really ...

Hello I'm Storm and I shall review your story for you. First thing to know is that for every story post you have to do two reviews. There are more ...

Heya Dragnet! I liked this. It was very interesting except for the grammar, punctuation, nitpicks like that. Dreamwalker got a lot of the stuff i have just a few more ...