StoneHeart

Okay, I've read a number of your pieces before, and am just dropping in because I noticed this one on the list. One thing you've always had that I've noticed ...

Hey Trio, Black here for a quick piece of feedback :P Okay, this was a decent chapter, your building of for a powerful main character in my mind, and I ...

Hey Wildcat! Black finally arrived for your requested review (which, it turns out, won't really end up being all that huge and great -sadly :( ) Okay, so first things ...

Okay, I have to admit, Emm, that was a rather odd story . . . oddly written, with an odd subject. But well done! I enjoyed your style -odd though ...

Hey Valkyrie . . . Black here for your requested review. First off: You do realize that vampire stories are completely cliché? Granted, vampire stories sometimes turn out to give ...

Hey Sparkle, I figured I'd drop in for a couple of pieces of advice on this piece. First thing I want to say: THIS PIECE IS AWESOME! The idea is ...

Hey Hyena, black here for a quick comment/ review (more of a comment I think). So first off; WOW! I'm quite simply impressed: Your use of wording, emotions and tension ...

Hey Arc . . . is it just me or did you not paste all of this piece over? You've ended it really abruptly -so abruptly I feel like you've ...

Is it weird that I was listening to 'The Ants Go Marching on' as I read this? Because I thought it was! The beats go together perfectly for some really ...

Hey Fanatic! Black here for a quick review day review. I must admit, that is some pretty badly messed up formatting (if this is a poem at all!). Really though ...

. . . noticed this certain piece in the Green Room and couldn't resist dropping by for a quick review. I'll keep it short so as not to get TOO ...

I have to get this out of the green room, so mehr. I'm going to find everything wrong (and give all the advice that I can). Feel free to read ...

Hey wholesome! Black here dropping by for a quick review day review! Hope it helps you out! So; my thoughts. #1 Wow. Originality has no bounds in this piece. I ...

Hey thar! Black here for a review. Forgive me if I'm incomprehensible (I'm working on my NUMEROUS issues). . . So, yes, my thoughts on this piece! First thought: Really, ...

Hey Leo, Black here for a quick review day Review! Okay, so this was interesting -but not like the last piece that I read. Personally I don't like old English. ...