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Re: The Many Deaths of Kara Acosta - Part 1
Interesting premise. Sort of a worst case scenario X-Men meets Dragonball(golden eyes?) meets mecha anime meets Dystopian western. "Cars whizz pass me" past, not pass. I believe. "giant, black, goliat
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Re: Our Painful Requiem
This was great. Vivid and interesting little plot bunny. I'm left wondering how it all goes down, really, which is my only gripe with this is that even for a ...
Mar 20, 2025 -
Re: Bethany meets Samara
Hello, I am reviewing? What? I'll add some stuff as I go along with some closing thoughts at the end. First the nitpicks / grammar/ flow stuff: "so scary they ...
Mar 20, 2025 -
Re: The Diary of a Failure
Okay, I feel like I need to review this(yay points mining for the shameless) Okay so your style of writing is beautiful, as I've already told you, you have an ...
Oct 23, 2013 -
Re: Me (for lack of a better title)
Hai DooDooHead. I loved this one, the messages are different in each paragraph(no I do not know the correct word for those, that's how much I suck at poetry ;) ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy ch. 1-2 (edited)
Hey there! Stef back to review chapter 1 and 2! Okay so first of all, I found a huge lack of description in your story. I am a huge fan ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy
Hey there! Stef here for a review spree, as I will try and review all the chapters of 'The Prophecy' that you posted! Nice prologue, you introduce the main characters ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Rain doesn't fall in the desert
This.. This was beautiful. I don't usually read poetry myself, but the title made me curious. This was an absolutely beautiful piece, the imagery projected was vivid and I really ...
Sep 16, 2013 -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
I loved this, this honestly was my response(albeit a bit more frustrated and with a couple more swear words) to the people that told me they wanted to be writers. ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: The Sun Children I - Prologue - Draft 1
Hey there! Stef here to give you a review :) I loved this! Honestly, your descriptive style is awesome, on par with a lot of books that I've read :) ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter One
Hey there! I really liked this, you introduced at least one of the main abilities of a Devil Touched person very nicely, and you showed us a part of the ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Prologue
Hey there! Alright, I'll make this short since it's a short prologue! First of all, rather interesting in general, makes me want to know about them more, the fact that ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Prologue - Shadowdale
Hey, Stef here to review your prologue :D First of all, good job on keeping me guessing on what was happening in the story, that left me wanting to read ...
Aug 25, 2013
