StealTheWorld

First of all, I've been impressed once again by your work. Congrats, fortis :) "She love to make tracks in the snow," There should be an 's' after 'love'. Or ...

This was silly and the most delightful way. Because while we never take the time to think of these things, it makes so much sense. I love how you question ...

Hey there :) I did honestly enjoy this poem. However, a few lines could use some work: - "Making my heart be filled Filled with hate and sorrow" This could ...

Wow. Um...I don't really know what to start with. If I have to mention something that needs work, I'd probably go with the beginning. The rhythm was great, but some ...

I like this. It starts out intimate and encouraging, like a sympathetic friend. Then towards the end, the tone grows more aggravated and impatient. Like someone who cares about you ...

Hey! Honestly, I like this poem. It tells people what girls are like. That under all that sweetness is something dark that can't be seen just by looking. In my ...

I was drawn in by the title. It's a very intriguing one indeed. I found several misplaced commas, and an apostrophe in the word "let's". It should be "lets", meaning ...

Hello :) DarkHeart here with your review. The first thing that caught my attention was the feeling of abandonment. He's looking, but she's not there. The person looking for Miranda ...

It took me a while to write this review out, mostly because you left me stunned--in a way. First things first: Imagery. The picture you painted with this poem was ...

I'm impressed. I was in desperate need of something said and heart-wrenching. You could say i got my fix here. I love the word use and similes. They made me ...

RyiaGreene, This is a pretty unique idea. I like the fact that they're fairies, but what makes them any different from humans, aside from what they look like? They act ...

Amberchelli, It was a nice poem, but I don't see where the twist is. I also believe there are a few incorrectly placed periods somewhere in there, but they shouldn't ...

Hey there, DarkKnight9! The poem was intriguing from beginning to end and I could NOT, for the life of me, just read it once. So I read it three times ...

I like the twist. It was fascinating and very unexpected. I like the way you included dialogue in the poem because it gives it this story-like feel to it (I ...