Starleene

Hey there! Starleene here! I have come to review your work! Yay! Let’s take this stanza by stanza, eh? “Hollow thudding of a heart that no longer cares, empty in ...

Hello there! Starleene here! I’m here to review your work! So let’s get started, shall we? The first thing I notice is that you like commas; a lot of commas. ...

Hello there! Starleene here! First off I have to inform you that this is going to be a very nit-picky review and I apologise in advance but I want to ...

Hey there! Starleene here! I noticed your work and decided to pop in and see what it was about! Well then, let’s get right to it! “We all have a ...

Hey! Starleene here! Let’s just jump right in then, shall we? I think stanza by stanza should suit us just fine, don’t you think? “well I've seen colors and hands ...

Hello! Starleene here! I’m not one for beating around the bush so why don’t we just jump right in, eh? “Being held at gunpoint could have been the scariest thing ...

Hello! Starleene here! First off I want to say that this is a good idea, I think that you just need to expand on it a little more. It has ...

Hey! Starleene here! I believe that any writer should have the best shot and to do that you need an excellent review, regardless of age. Not that I'm promising that, ...

Hello, Starleene here! First off I just want to mention that this was beautifully written and constructed. Rarely do I encounter work of this quality. So to begin, the grammar ...

Starleene here! It's been a while so let’s see if I still have it! First off: Whoa. The emotion was intense. I don't usually read stories that depress me but ...

Hey hey!! Starleene here! Great story but here a few nit picks! :) : Taylor's hair flowed as she ran through the freezing snow, her entire body shaking but that ...

Hey hey!! I for one love this story (I'm such a sucker for tragic romamnces (: ). You did mention this line alot in your writing...maybe change it up and ...

Hello there! So I'm not going to beat around the bush, I'm jsut going to jump right in. You say this guy is drunk right here but the way you ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Since most of the people before have already commented on the bad, I'll just leave a positive note :D It was short, sweet and to ...

Oh...My...Gosh... This was wicked. I wanted to stop reading it was so creepy but you kept pulling me back in! The ending! Ahhh! I can't even descibe how well you ...