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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Slip

    Holy Kaltenecker I love it. The slow pace, the tension, but the calm from the ocean!! This is just so beautiful!! The imagery you provided with the water, the shoes ...

    Apr 27, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Reasons

    My goodness, that put a stake in my heart. I want to give you a hug, cause I've been there. The thing is, no matter how hard someone can try ...

    Apr 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Shadow On My Past

    This is such a great piece of poetry!! Though, I'm not sure if this was a mistake, but in line 11- "And I can breath" was it supposed to be ...

    Apr 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: :(

    I love that, and I understand that life can be bitter-sweet. This poem has a lot of heart, and emotion in it, I can tell what you were feeling. In ...

    Apr 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Review Re: Is it better to Hate yourself Or Hate someone else?

    Wow. I don't think I can answer that question, cause I'm asking the same thing. I really liked how you structured this, and it was well written. I could picture ...

    Aug 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: ​[A cat is just a wild animal, but if it can star in a Bildungsroman, then maybe domestication has some weight to it, no?]

    I feel like I've seen this title somewhere before... But other than that, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I hope you enjoyed writing it. :) The structure of ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: College Application Essay

    First of all, I wish you good luck getting into your collage! Second, your essay was very well written. You seem very- ready to take on the world, and determined ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Spiritual Re: Vendetta

    ::Explosion sounds:: That, was the sound of my brain exploding. This makes me want to go back to writing scary stories, and oh my gosh I can't express how HAPPY ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Art » Realistic, Narrative Re: “The Damned” a narrative/thought/short

    This touched my heart. I can feel how much work you put into this, and the true emotion... I can totally feel that, (Is that weird? Or no, cause I ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Selfish Desires

    I am amazed. (Half of this is fangirling please forgive me i'M nEw) How do people come up with this stuff? How did you come up with this??? THIS IS ...

    Aug 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: They told me

    This is my first reveiw and I'm not sure if there is a specific way to do this but- I really loved this!! This masterpiece is entirely unique in so ...

    Aug 11, 2021


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