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Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.5 (Finale)
Hi! ...well. That was interesting. And even more disturbing than I assumed. Honestly, that was bizarre. I assume the general lost his family and is now trying to pretend he ...
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Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.4
Hi! So now we know what happened! Now that it's said, I do remember something about the vaccine, but it wasn't clear before. Making all the zombies have rabies is ...
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Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.3
Hi! This was an interesting section. It's kind of hard to talk about, so this review will probably be a bit shorter. Having the zombies attracted by noise is almost ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.2
Hi! I really, really, really liked this section. It was extremely strong. Not much was happening story-wise, but character-wise, this was the strongest part yet. What you're doing to Beth ...
Jun 29, 2016 -
Re: Z-Day: Nothing Is As It Seems ~ Chapter 3.1
Hi! You do have more! I really liked how this part got a bit more into the reality of an apocalypse. So far, most of the people our group have ...
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Re: Making a Difference...Into What?
Hello! This was really interesting! I like the whole idea of "uniqueness". I don't know what you're trying to say by having them discuss this, but the closest thing I ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Making a Difference...How?
Hello! I liked this! It was cool to have a discussion about society in a group setting. We know one of the characters is ten and one is a teacher, ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Shame
Hello! Wow, this is really strong. I can feel a lot of emotion in this piece. It's very clear what you think of your father, your mother, and your family ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 2
Hello! I just came from the first part of this. The story is really picking up pace now, isn't it? The entire introduction scene works well here as we get ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: A Rift Between Magi: Chapter 1
Hello! This is very interesting. I'm not quite sure what to make of it. The bullying scene is cliche, as is the sudden rescue, but I'm not holding that against ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: District 16 - A Collection of Memories (1)
Hello! I was really taken in by this piece. It had a kind of soothing quality even as it discussed these difficult topic that you don't know much about. It ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Parody of a Text Book
Hello! This was pretty funny! I know what you mean by this. Nowadays, a lot of the best words are going to waste! I disagree, personally, that it's because others ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Let The Good Times Roll - Chapter 1
Hello! Wow, that was interesting! I liked the character you showed us, of a slightly annoying boy who's just trying to get by in life. It's really good, and I ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Lies and Deceit- Prologue
Hello! I'm coming from reading the first chapter, as I didn't know there was a prologue. I feel like this give a bit too much away to be a prologue. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1
Hello! Wow, this was pretty good! I already want to meet this lady. While a woman being harassed at a bar is a little cliche, things are cliche for a ...
Jun 26, 2016
