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Hi carelessaussie13. Sickness had a smell. It was thick like honey, dusty like a summer without rain and acidic like the heavy stench of vinegar. You can't smell sickness. Sickness ...

I'm back from lunch. They told us to look away from the flames, I like your use of lines here. Having the image completed on the second line highlights the ...

Hey there Castles. I always like reading your works for some reason, they have that sort of strangeness to them. We draw thick outlines, try to make the colours suit. ...

Hi there Lex, and welcome to YWS. Nice picture you have there. :D I lay down in my bed trying to put him out of him head You mean "out ...

Hey there Dustfinger, and welcome to YWS. After reading your poem the first time though, I wasn't sure as to what message or theme you were trying to express here. ...

Hey there Rosey Unicorn. The cheer was soon being echoed throughout the grand hall. From my experiences, "echoed" are one of those words that novice writers would use to describe ...

Sup Kevsta, and welcome to YWS. I see you like family guy. Family guy for the win! The man whimpered in the corner of the cave. Blood seeped out from ...

Hey there Reason Invalid. I printed this out and was reading it during lunch. Here are some of my notes on it. The radio hummed fuzzily in the office. I ...

Round 3 little Teddiursa. “Your aunt and I have been looking for you for hours! Aly, tell us before you leave! You don’t know what sort of a man might ...

Hey there lxtmidnight, just dropping in briefly. You've got me interested, but only due to the last sentence. I'm curious as to the reasons behind it. However, what disappointed me ...

Hi there M Dragon, welcome to YWS. Good to see another fantasy writer. All I could see was see the dry, cracked ground stretch off in to the horizon where ...

Hey there Thealyn Rosewolf, welcome to YWS. The sound from the alarm woke me up before I was ready to start my day after one of his visits, but is ...

Hello Archer123, and welcome to YWS. My name is Andy and I will be your reviewer for today. The air was cold and muggy. Everytime I took a breath it ...

Yay Wolf! Welcome back. I get to see more of your writing. It's warm inside the store. Seeing Noah, a boy from my class, I make my way to the ...

Hey there Tusker. The wind tickled his ear and played an impossible note on the flute. The bamboo called to him and it wasn’t long before he let his lips ...