SpiritedWolfe

Hello, Foxtail. Wolf here for a review. So, I saw the edited version of chapter one, and I must say it looks much better. Speaking if which, I recommend kind ...

Hello, Raven. Wolf here for a review. Sometimes I curse my logistic brain, and I say that because I'm having a hard time grasping why Rease would think her adoptive ...

Hello, Foxtail. Wolf here for a review. I'll just go right into the criticism. For the most part, I really feel like all of this was really rushed through and ...

Hello, R4P17. Wolf here for a review. Alright, so I'm only a paragraph in this, and I want to note, the word 'exhausted' has already been used three times. The ...

Hello, Abhilash007. Wolf here for a review. So, as Biscuits pointed out, there are quite a few grammar errors in this, some being run-on sentences, or sentence fragments, but I'll ...

Hello, MissAtomicBomb. Wolf here for a review. Very interesting! So, though I did not leave a review, I did read the previous chapter and I'll probably comment on both of ...

Hello, ChyrsoStemma. Wolf here for a review. So, I'm going to dive straight into the criticism. So, I haven't read the previous chapter, which might contribute a little bit, but ...

Hello, MissGangamash. Wolf here for a review. Alright, first things first. I can understand that you kind of want to get all this background information out of the way so ...

Hello, Pomp, Writer, Ancient and Raven. Wolf here for something close to a review. My very first reaction to this after I finished reading: *dying of laughter* "What the heck ...

Hello, Tia. Wolf here for a review. First things first, I notice a lot of grammar issues in this. For instance, sometimes the spacing after punctuation is a little iffy, ...

Hello, Fizz, Wolf here for a review. I'll try to focus more on grammar and execution rather than content, just because this seems like a touchy subject, though it did ...

Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. Wow, Laurel is a total jerk. Pairing up with Artemis like that, how rude. That just goes to show how many grudges people ...

Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for another review. I'm finally here early this time! I'm catching up... To the review! So I feel like Jae is a pretty important character, yes? ...

Hello, Artemis, Wolf here for a review. You're making it harder and harder for me to reviews these, because these chapters just keep getting better with each passing chapter. This ...

Hello, Royal, Wolf here for a review. I haven't read your other works myself, but I've heard from others that they're really good and I see that reflecting here. This ...