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Re: Monica: The Untold Story- Chapter 1
Hello there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely piece of yours ^^ This was quite an enjoyable read, since it's short and sweet and it quickly introduces ...
May 25, 2016 -
Re: A Beastly Summer Night
Hiya, Bella! I'm here for a quick review of this piece of yours ^^ While I enjoyed the twist toward the end -- it was definitely unexpected -- I didn't ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: A Message
Hello there! I'm here to give a review for this lovely piece of yours ^^ Let's get started ~ The first thing that struck out to me is that this ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: It begins where it ends
Hello there! So, I'll just jump right into it here by saying that this could use a lot of work. First off, there are a lot of grammatical errors that ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Mommy Dearest
Hello there! :3 I'll just jump right into the review. The first thing that was off to me was that David is only three years old and yet he acted ...
May 20, 2016 -
Re: Fathers Voice
Hello there, and welcome to YWS! ^^ I hope you're enjoying yourself around here and if you have any questions, please feel free to ask ~ To the review! First ...
May 19, 2016 -
Re: All That Glitters Is Not Gold
Hello there! I'm here for a quick review on your fine piece. :3 First thing I want to point out is that I strongly recommend you read through this, since ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: Burned 7.1
Hai! I'm not seven months late this time ~ So, I'll just jump into the review. Honestly, I'm not really feeling this chapter quite like the other ones. For one, ...
May 16, 2016 -
Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 2
Hiya, Adri! I am here for reviewing once more :3 and once again, I don't have a whole lot to say. Rydia touched on one of my biggest points, and ...
May 14, 2016 -
Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 1
Hiya, Adri! Ready again for another thing? The first sort of issue I have with this is that the beginning is a little vague for me. I totally appreciate that ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~M Part One & Two
Hey there, R4~ Here again for a review for yet another segment of this lovely novel! So, I've been touching on dialogue a lot recently, and I see in this ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Working Title: Chapter Four
Hello there! I'm here to rescue this poor chapter for the green room ~! I do want to apologize for not reading previous chapters and any questions that may've been ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Sea Fever
Adri! I am here -- procrastination is on pause. To the review? Okay, one of my biggest complaints for this is that I don't feel like we really got an ...
May 10, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~L Part Two
Hello again! I fully intend to catch up soon, so that I never have to do seventeen reviews in a weekend again xD To the review? I'll keep this one ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Typo Alley~L Part One
Hey r4! I'm finally getting around to this ^^ I read this ages ago and I haven't read previous reviews, so just bear with me! (It may also be very ...
May 7, 2016
