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SpiritedWolfe

and i kept walking, even if my feet were too tired to hold me up anymore

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Monica: The Untold Story- Chapter 1

    Hello there! I'm here for a quick review on this lovely piece of yours ^^ This was quite an enjoyable read, since it's short and sweet and it quickly introduces ...

    May 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: A Beastly Summer Night

    Hiya, Bella! I'm here for a quick review of this piece of yours ^^ While I enjoyed the twist toward the end -- it was definitely unexpected -- I didn't ...

    May 24, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: A Message

    Hello there! I'm here to give a review for this lovely piece of yours ^^ Let's get started ~ The first thing that struck out to me is that this ...

    May 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: It begins where it ends

    Hello there! So, I'll just jump right into it here by saying that this could use a lot of work. First off, there are a lot of grammatical errors that ...

    May 21, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Mommy Dearest

    Hello there! :3 I'll just jump right into the review. The first thing that was off to me was that David is only three years old and yet he acted ...

    May 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Fathers Voice

    Hello there, and welcome to YWS! ^^ I hope you're enjoying yourself around here and if you have any questions, please feel free to ask ~ To the review! First ...

    May 19, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: All That Glitters Is Not Gold

    Hello there! I'm here for a quick review on your fine piece. :3 First thing I want to point out is that I strongly recommend you read through this, since ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 7.1

    Hai! I'm not seven months late this time ~ So, I'll just jump into the review. Honestly, I'm not really feeling this chapter quite like the other ones. For one, ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 2

    Hiya, Adri! I am here for reviewing once more :3 and once again, I don't have a whole lot to say. Rydia touched on one of my biggest points, and ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: For All Intents and Purposes - pt. 1

    Hiya, Adri! Ready again for another thing? The first sort of issue I have with this is that the beginning is a little vague for me. I totally appreciate that ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~M Part One & Two

    Hey there, R4~ Here again for a review for yet another segment of this lovely novel! So, I've been touching on dialogue a lot recently, and I see in this ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Working Title: Chapter Four

    Hello there! I'm here to rescue this poor chapter for the green room ~! I do want to apologize for not reading previous chapters and any questions that may've been ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Sea Fever

    Adri! I am here -- procrastination is on pause. To the review? Okay, one of my biggest complaints for this is that I don't feel like we really got an ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~L Part Two

    Hello again! I fully intend to catch up soon, so that I never have to do seventeen reviews in a weekend again xD To the review? I'll keep this one ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~L Part One

    Hey r4! I'm finally getting around to this ^^ I read this ages ago and I haven't read previous reviews, so just bear with me! (It may also be very ...

    May 7, 2016


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