SpeedyPencil

Wow I really love this poem! I particularly like the flow and general format and wording of the piece. my favourite wast was this line: "And suddenly the whistle cries." ...

Wow I love the flow and the gaps and everything that you changed to give the poem a voice! Don't be nervous, it's an amazing poem! I can't really point ...

Welcome to YWP! I'm here to review your poem! I really liked the flow and structure your poem had. Some of your wording was really great too, I especially liked ...

Hello, I'm Speedy! Nice piece you got here. Now onto the review! It's nice for a prologue but most prologues although shorter than chapters are still a little longer and ...

Love this piece! It's very touching and in a weird way relatable. Loved the story line, the description and the ending. Oh and I also really liked the title and ...

Hello, my name is speedy and I will be reviewing your writing! :D First of, so the idea isn't you know all that original, the whole diary and being forced ...

Hello! I'm speedy, and I will be reviewing your piece! I'll try and be nit picky as possible seeing it's a small piece and otherwise I won't have much to ...

Hello! I'm speedy, nice story you have there! Now onto reviewing: It's a good read but there are quiet a few grammatical issues (which could easily be fixed with a ...

Love the poem Rainn! I loved the vocabulary and the rhythm of it, it would make good song lyrics. I liked the subject too, of the morning star. For a ...

Great piece Servent4Christ! "Highschool, the place where creativity goes to die." So true! In fact, that's what I'd say about most of the piece! It's so easy to relate to ...

What a great piece you've written YelloSparrow! Ok so, I loved your description and vocabulary in this. I also loved the general writing style. I'm very into reading this kind ...

Wow I love this. It definitely symbolizes a city and how urban life takes over. I love the way you compare things and the symbolism and phrases you use are ...

Amazing and touching! I beautiful yet depressing read. I think you did really wonderfully with this, It's a creative way to write it and it deffinately pays off. It just ...

I loved this! The rhythm was perfect and you can tell you put a lot of work into it, I especially liked the first few paragraphs and the last. I ...