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Re: Writer's block
Hey, there! This is a really good interpretation of the frustrations of writer's block, especially the lines: "When would lightning strike? Electricity coursing through our veins, licking across our s
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: It is indeed a big, bad world.
Great poem! I really think that it flows nicely (then again, maybe someone else thinks otherwise... I'm not too keen when it comes to poetry, I just like reading it, ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: I waited for you
Your poetry is absolutely wonderful. As someone with no poetic talent whatsoever, I can't help but be a bit envious. Maybe it's typical or a bit cliché, but I picture ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: My ideas
I agree with what Thewriter said, don't put yourself down. Keep your chin up and continue writing no matter what. I rather enjoyed reading this :) I'm not that great ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Experiment 015
In my opinion, you know how to leave a reader wanting to know more. What happened? How did the character end up that way? What is going on? Typical questions, ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Scary Things in Scarier Basements
This was a really good read lol For some reason, I really like the style in which this is written.. It's very different, and I like different. It's suspenseful, funny, ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: "Breathe"
becausethiswasinthewrongplacebefore... >.> I truly enjoyed this piece! Something about it really spoke to me, especially the 'I want to live' part. To me, this just screams breaking free and being ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: jetliners
'Oh, big old jet airliner, don't carry me too far away~' Sorry... I had to. *ahem* This was an incredible piece of poetry. It's written in a very different style ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: True Love
This was absolutely hilarious! Definitely made my day, that's for sure. I love how misleading the title is, yet all the same it's funny because it's not what people would ...
Jun 24, 2014
