Soulkana

My hands are alive with a burning feeling I can feel the words pouring from the very back of my mind The nets of the cream colored, blue lined page ...

This feeling I can't ignore A sense of emptiness and isolation Teardrops from the heavens start to pour As I sit here in the silance Like an empty hallway haunted ...

Ok I have a few corrections to point out first ^^ Don't feel bad everyone makes errors even me XD Do you ever feel alone? Like you're so fragile, Numb ...

I absolutely love this poem hugs* I poured my heart out to you Only to have it scooped up and cut into little pieces of lies If I had imagined ...

Hehe you're still amazing my friend. Keep writing. There were some minor spelling mistakes and some problems which I was confused but other than that you did great. I seriously ...

I give. by MilkNCookies on Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:00 pm I know it'll overtake me, your pain, your crazy grin. My poor heart can't take this, It's slowly giving ...

Light the sun, the moon and the stars Stars appear on velvet sky as those cheerful sun beams fade. They wave the sunny rays goodbye and in the darkness, they ...

Absoulutely LOVE it haha hopefully I will be able to read it slower than I am now, since I'm at school and almost got caught mwahahaha anyways you did awesome ...

This was magnificently done and I truly can't wait to read more and more of this wonderful story please continue. As the evening sun fell below the horizon, showering the ...

Oh my god that was amazing. I actually could vision a young woman telling the story as it was. I can't wait for more nor can I wait to find ...

THAT WAS AMAZING....Seriously can't think of what to say am still trying to understand how i managed to read it all since i'm so amazed XD hehehe you did goood ...

You did AMAZING and I truly cannot wait to read more once I'm healthier. I couldn't really read it as thoroughly as I could've but once i'm better I shall ...

I'm curious to where this is heading haha. It was rather short and I was kind of wondering if you were going to continue with it. Hopefully you keep writing ...

Want to say I absolutely love your work^^ I truly loved the creativity you showed and also shall eagerly await the next chapter for you have caught my curiosity with ...

Since everyone has already put in their opinions I wish to say I think if you spaced the paragraphs and dialogues it would much easier to read but other than ...