Published April 5, 2011
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Hehe you're still amazing my friend. Keep writing. There were some minor spelling mistakes and some problems which I was confused but other than that you did great. I seriously would think you should publish this ^^ I would most definitely buy it haha. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!!
Soulkana<3
First. You know the whole memory thing that we talked about, and you misspelled some words and work on your grammar in some places. That's the bad part. The good part is THIS IS TOTALLY EPIC. Im Tellin you at the end you should think about getting this published. Because you need to share this with the world. KEEP WRITING so i can keep reading.
-Your Writing Buddy