Soulkana

“You have to fight it . I can’t do it for you! Remember who you are. Think back to all of the times we had together, I know the real ...

That was sad. It was very descriptive and and it painted a good but sad painting in my head. I hope to read more of this story soon if you ...

Well this is an interesting start. I could picture this very clearly in my head; my word is to make it longer. Other than that this is a very good ...

This made me cry; I actually understand completely what you are saying. You put a lot of emotion into this and it makes me very happy to read it; it ...

This is very intense and very descriptive. I could feel the emotion and could see the picture scene very clearly. So I say awesome job and I hope you write ...

I like this and you have me a very clear picture in my head. Very well done and amazing descriptions. Keep up the good work I hope to see more ...

Very good poem. You painted a very nice picture in my head! Hope to see more from you and I could not see any grammar or spelling mistakes in this ...

I sat on my bed at home, bored out of my mind. Thinking of things to do, i should be I finally settled on taking a walk through the woods. ...

This is totally awesome....just wish it was longer and you added to it...I really would love to see how this all turns out in the end. However, do as you ...

This is good; very well done. However there are some things you need to work on. One is the spacing of paragraphs like Ilovebubbles123 has pointed out. It is major ...

Very amazing and rather very descriptive. I could picture this taking place rather easily. Want to know what happens so I hope you add more to this soon!!! Good luck ...

Dear god this was beautiful!!! I want to read more like sooon!!! I hope you plan on adding more to this it would turn out amazing!!!!! Good luck with this ...

Haha I am not very descriptive in my mind and yet I say you went a little overboard with them! But oh well it was still awesome and I can't ...

Very good work here!!! Painted a really good scene and very descriptive so thats a plus haha. Well I can't find any spelling or grammar errors nor punctuation. So good ...

I say awesome even though its quite shorter than the last one!! Lols anyways this is beautifully done and very inspiring!!! Hopefully I read more of your works soon they ...