Ohh, I like this. Nice use of language. I have a feeling that a lot of users here won't like the lack of grammar but personally I don't think this poem need any, it is poetry not prose but then again that is just me. If doesn't flow to well but the breaks add to the poem, there is also a nice use of imagery and personification. In general a nice poem. Sorry for the lousy review.
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