Soulfulwriter

Thank you. Will read when I get home

Thank you

I understand.

Lol Thank you. I just pulled the name from a site I use.

The main character is just really telling the reader what she has seen. Lol for the 'trust' it's what we say here. It is like trust me, but less words, ...

Thanks.

ok thanks.

Thanks, but I need more detail in your comment. Like what wording errors? And I have read it and I don't see anything else wrong, hence why I brought it ...

I am not sure how to do that. I wish you could see what I had written before I made all the edits and stuff

I am going through it and trying to make all of the chapters a little over 1500 words. But, I am also trying to input the changes in there as ...

Alright.

you are welcome. I would have gotten to more, but the teacher started passing out the exams.

I appreciate that! Means a lot to me. -cries hysterically.-

-waves- Thanks!!! I will fix those later on today or tomorrow.

oh well....