Sophiewrites

Hahah totally loved this, one line, and definitively goosebumps! But how exactly does that work you know.. without skin?

Thanks very much! I spelt it that way on purpose, you totally guessed it! :)

Thank you very much for the kind review!

yessssssss perfect I'm excited already

hellohelT Thank you very much I am flattered :> I changed it! I like it better now, just flows better.

Hello!!! Thank you for your review! You are completely right with the One thing, I shall change it. I just love yws because I can never spot these things on ...

Hello thank you for that review :)) Actually I did the spacing think on purpose i think it shows how messy the thoughts are and how it's not a classic ...

Hello Thank you for you detailed review! i really love some of your suggestions, this was one of those poems you scribble in your notebook at 3 am so the ...

Hey thank you for the review! :) Indeed I didn't capatalize it on purpose as I felt it was the final conclusion of the poem, there is no colour gray, ...

Thank you very much!

Thank you so much for your review with starving I meant the cells as the lover used to be their sunlight and thsu nutrition! :)

Thank you so much means a lot

Thank you for your review!

Hello! Sophiewrites here for a quick review! To be honest I didn't expect much after you opening paragraph, seriously wow don't ever put yourself down like that again! I was ...

yaaay sophies