SophieSaysWriting

I loved this! I'm currently learning french so, I enjoyed the challenge of translating and understanding the poem in what you could call, it's 'native language'. French always looks and ...

Hello! First let me say, WOW this story is incredibly creative! As this is meant to be a review, I'll start off with one little mistake I think I found. ...

First off I thought this was sweet. I personally am a dog person, but I also have a cat and I love him to death! In the spirit of this ...

Wow! I would like to start by saying I loved reading this, right from the beginning it caught my attention. It has a wonderful mystery to it and pulls the ...

Wow, I really liked this! I can't wait for you to post more! I just have some spelling errors, nothing major. “Overpopulation,” she thought. “That or people would’ve never learn ...

Hello! Sophie here. so this was an interesting poem. Just some thoughts/suggestions. So this gives little detail and is very hard to connect with. when at first this started i ...

Nice job. This is definitely an interesting concept. Just some tips. Some of you wording is misplaced like an extra word was being added on. Also some of the words ...

This was really good! Just some tips. In this story you are talking about her floating over a plain (this is implied with the flowers and cottages correct me if ...

This is pretty good. Just some tips. So this was a bit choppy with lines and transitions from rhyme to rhyme. also whats this? "don't make pale face."? It sort ...

Hello Sophie here! This is really good (this is your 3rd one so that makes sense). So in terms of a review here it is. I got a bit confused ...

Cute! Just here to give a tip. This was realy cute to read! But it would be great if you made it longer. This is something that can easily be ...

This was a great short story! I loved the way you captured your story, you instantly grabed my attention. Here are some tips. Tru and separate your parahgraphs, It makes ...

Wow! this is truly Amazing! But in a review I have some thoughts, I understand the mysteriousness you pushed but in the last 2 paragraphs i got a bit confused. ...

Hello! here to give i quick review. The story is really good, it got my attention right away! But towards the end I got a bit confused. I had to ...

Wow! This truly is a story that can go far, The detail in it is Amazing i can see practically nothing wrong with it! I will give one suggestion though, ...