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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 13 & 14

    Hey Gangamash! Happy Review Day! So I really have very little to comment on in this chapter. Biscuits already mentioned most of the grammatical things, and these chapters were very ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Elementárni ~ 3.1

    Hey Pomp. This is going to be a fail of a review, just preparing you. :P The reason I've been putting this off is because I honestly don't know what ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 9 Ally

    Heyyyy so Night here finally for this review! I'm so excited. I read this all today during theatre class. XD I'm going to do this for my 15 minutes, but ...

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: What Have We Done?

    Hey wisegirl. Congrats on the feature. I love how you are urging people to change our violent ways and denial of it. That's awesome. We need some spurring on every ...

    Jan 3, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    Hey Satira! I saw your frustration about unhelpful reviews, and thought maybe I could give it a try. Poetry is very hard to review, so I'll try my best. :) ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, General Re: All Checks Signed

    Hello Arkhalon. I found this to be very interesting, and sadly, often true, view on the church. I loved this poem for the description used, and I felt that you ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 12

    Hey Ganga! Here for another review! Wow. Wowwowwow. That was such an amazing chapter. The character interaction, the dialogue balance with descriptions, all of it was so well-played. I loved ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny : Chapter 11 (Revised)

    Hey Gangamash! Here for another short review! So I think Biscuits got all of the grammatical stuff, and I understand that it's only been a day. I'll focus on the ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 10

    Hey Ganga! I'm so sorry for the wait. I had exams and life really has been a jerk lately. Anyway, onto a short review, as I'll focus more on the ...

    Dec 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Feminine Definition

    I was kind of waiting for there to be a turn in the train of thought, like switching from the many negative stereotypes to say, what you mentioned about women ...

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Culture Re: End the "R-Word!"

    Amen! Goodness, you do not know how much I despise the word. Since it is used medically to describe mentally disabled persons, as a individual with close ties to the ...

    Dec 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Progeny : Chapter 9

    Hey Ganga! So sorry for the wait. Here I am, onto the review! Wow. This was by far the best chapter that you've presented for a while. I seriously enjoyed ...

    Nov 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 8

    Hey Gangamash! Happy Review Day! Sorry for the wait, my life has been insane. Onto the review! A few quick grammatical/plotting comments. Even though most were in hibernation, she could ...

    Oct 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Anomaly: Chapter 1.2

    Traaaaaunt! Thanks for the next chapter! So happy. :D So I have a question about Hanah's spelling? If you changed the spelling, were you planning to change it in the ...

    Oct 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Premonition: Prologue and Chapter One

    Wow. That was incredible. I could seriously see that being made into a novel. The writing style sucked me in immediately and your characters seem so realistic. There is just ...

    Oct 12, 2014


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