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Re: The Progeny: Chapter 13 & 14
Hey Gangamash! Happy Review Day! So I really have very little to comment on in this chapter. Biscuits already mentioned most of the grammatical things, and these chapters were very ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Elementárni ~ 3.1
Hey Pomp. This is going to be a fail of a review, just preparing you. :P The reason I've been putting this off is because I honestly don't know what ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 9 Ally
Heyyyy so Night here finally for this review! I'm so excited. I read this all today during theatre class. XD I'm going to do this for my 15 minutes, but ...
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: What Have We Done?
Hey wisegirl. Congrats on the feature. I love how you are urging people to change our violent ways and denial of it. That's awesome. We need some spurring on every ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: I listen to audiobooks.
Hey Satira! I saw your frustration about unhelpful reviews, and thought maybe I could give it a try. Poetry is very hard to review, so I'll try my best. :) ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: All Checks Signed
Hello Arkhalon. I found this to be very interesting, and sadly, often true, view on the church. I loved this poem for the description used, and I felt that you ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 12
Hey Ganga! Here for another review! Wow. Wowwowwow. That was such an amazing chapter. The character interaction, the dialogue balance with descriptions, all of it was so well-played. I loved ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 11 (Revised)
Hey Gangamash! Here for another short review! So I think Biscuits got all of the grammatical stuff, and I understand that it's only been a day. I'll focus on the ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 10
Hey Ganga! I'm so sorry for the wait. I had exams and life really has been a jerk lately. Anyway, onto a short review, as I'll focus more on the ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: A Feminine Definition
I was kind of waiting for there to be a turn in the train of thought, like switching from the many negative stereotypes to say, what you mentioned about women ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: End the "R-Word!"
Amen! Goodness, you do not know how much I despise the word. Since it is used medically to describe mentally disabled persons, as a individual with close ties to the ...
Dec 2, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 9
Hey Ganga! So sorry for the wait. Here I am, onto the review! Wow. This was by far the best chapter that you've presented for a while. I seriously enjoyed ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 8
Hey Gangamash! Happy Review Day! Sorry for the wait, my life has been insane. Onto the review! A few quick grammatical/plotting comments. Even though most were in hibernation, she could ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Anomaly: Chapter 1.2
Traaaaaunt! Thanks for the next chapter! So happy. :D So I have a question about Hanah's spelling? If you changed the spelling, were you planning to change it in the ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: Premonition: Prologue and Chapter One
Wow. That was incredible. I could seriously see that being made into a novel. The writing style sucked me in immediately and your characters seem so realistic. There is just ...
Oct 12, 2014
