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Re: Uniting Nations Chapter 2 (Sam)
Hey there, again! Another short review from little ol' me. Again, a lot of the previous reviewers said all that I have, but here goes. I feel like this chapter ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Corre
Hello, Elder! After all the lovely reviews you have given me, I am here to look at this lovely work. :) Quickly, I have two small errors that I caught, ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Uniting Nations Chapter 1 (Sam)
Hey there, Biscuits and Mess! Night here for a short review. I don't have much extra to point out, as many of the reviewers below me caught what I would ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Narthegal's Greed - Ch.2 Aust
Hey there! Happy Review Day. Night here for a quick review. For future reference, I can guarantee that you will get more reviews if you cut this into two or ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 21
Hey Ganga. Happy Review Day! Night here for a quick review. I enjoyed this chapter, but some of the errors throughout it made it hard for me to focus. I ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 20
Hey Ganga! Night here for another review! :) Grammar and nitpicks first, okay? Evie’s heart was in her throat as she stripped herself of her coat and threw into over ...
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: Mommy! Mommy! Look!
Hey there, Thriver! Hope you're enjoying YWS so far. :) Night here for a short review. Well, this is interesting. I liked how the poem's story was told from a ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Nevermore
Hey there! Night here for a quick review. As earlier reviewers said, I felt that the formatting was off here. It made it difficult for the reader to follow very ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hello, fellow 16-year-old! Night here for a quick review. Wow. This was beautiful. It has such a deep underlying meaning that the reader can interpret for themselves. This shattered relationship ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Vice Verses
Hello there! Night here for a short review. Okay, before I get started: I love Switchfoot. Vice Verses is one of my favorites. So thank you for being cool. XP ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: You Can't Buy Me
Hi, wisegirl! Lovely poem you have here. Well, the theme here is pretty obvious. Riches cannot buy love or affection. It's an interesting theme, and I'm curious as to what ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 19
Hey Gangamash! Wow, for once I'm the first reviewer. :) I did catch some grammatical stuff and a few awkward sentences so I'll start with that. She changed into her ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Running for Dreamers
I find this very interesting, as I have many friends in wheelchairs of their own. I think this short is well written, although I felt it could have added more. ...
Feb 24, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter's 17 & 18
Hey Ganga! Happy Review Day! Chapter 17 So I think this chapter flowed pretty well. It felt refreshing to meet a new character who has some mystery and who's obviously ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 16
Hey Ganga! Sorry for taking a while to get to this. Here we go! I saw very few grammatical errors, and I think Biscuits caught all of them. This chapter ...
Feb 16, 2015
