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Re: Life or Death? Chapter 2- Preparations to Leave
Hello, GreenTulip! Griff, here for a review on this lovely work of yours! First off, congrats on your second chapter. I read the first one so it would make sense, ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 1 Part 2 - The Brawl and Visitor
Hey Mess! Griff here for an extremely short review! Wow, I really enjoyed this. I really love the characters (and their names too ^-^) and the setting. Is this fantasy ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: How Batman Saved My Life
Hello, Griff here for a short review of this piece! I like the idea for this. The characters seemed believable and it was an interesting plot. However, I feel that ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: You can't even see me when I'm standing right in front of you.
Why did I like this? Because I admire your guts, and understand your feeling. If this is based on real life (which I'm sure at least part of it is, ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Rewind
Hiya, Griff here to review! Wow, lovely piece. I really love the thought that you put into this. The imagery that you created is really amazing. It is short and ...
Apr 13, 2014 -
Re: Ignorance
Hello, DarkHeart! Griff here for a short review. :) This is very interesting and thought-provoking. However, I am not sure what it is based on. What is "a Thespian's Musings"? ...
Mar 22, 2014 -
Re: Refurbish the Menace
Hello, Wriskypump! Griff here to review this amazing piece of yours! Wow. Just wow. This is really a masterpiece. It started out beautiful, tugged on the heartstrings just right, drew ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: The Hat Trick
Hi there! Griff here for a short review on this loooooooong piece. I have to agree with everything GoldFlame says. With attention disorders, I had a really hard time hunkering ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Straw Bullets Chapter 1 - Rising Storms
Hello, 221B. Griff, here to review this lovely work of yours. First off, I love villain stories. So when I realized that this was from the point of an escaped ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Happy Complex
Hi there, cha! Griff here to review this lovely work of yours! Wow. First off, I really love this poem. I generally enjoy free style poetry, and you did a ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Black Blood
Hi Jony! GriffinClaw, here to review this lovely piece of yours! First off, this is a very creatively written piece on creativity. XD I really enjoyed it. Some of my ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Regret
Hi anshira! Griff, here for an extremely short review! Wow. I really enjoyed this poem. It is written in a nice way and format, a conversational tone. I really liked ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Vanilla and cocoa
Hello Laure! Griff, here for an extremely short review. I love this poem! It flowed really nicely, and the ending just made me smile. My favorite line was It hollows ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Element - Prologue
Hello my dear racket! Griff, here to review this lovely work! First off, this is really well written. I really enjoyed it. The description is fantastic, and I liked how ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Heads or Tails Chapter One (1st Revision)
Hi opaquewillow! I'm Griff, here to review this work of yours. Okay. First things first. I agree with Jonathan. This is really long. It is well written, but it needs ...
Dec 29, 2013
