Sohini

thanks for pointing out my errors; the repeated sentence wasn't meant to be used.

oh, echidnas are spiny anteaters!!! cool. now that you really say that the bacon is the holy grail, it makes the sentence twice as funny!

nice and smooth and yes, very dramatic. philosophical too. i like it!

that was hilarious indeed!!! and in 5 mins? coool!! "So decided to cook him a spleen"-ewwwww. this reminds me of my poem "My Trip to the Sicks" well done, each ...

yeah, the 'never' word was over-used and the rhyming a bit forced at times. it was more of a repetation throughout. but the last line is awesome. well done for ...

nice flowing poem. short and sweet(why do i love using this phrase so much?) and "Words became land, "---eh??

wow this was great. loved the mystery about it and you have really created a phantasmic atmosphere. cool.

i found this a bit confusing but i liked the way the words are used!

thank you all. thanks for the help, i need the 'Where it begun' line. about the ending, i saw it that way MH did-with a much-needed un-rhymed BAM! thanks for ...

Very thoughtful and philosophical. The flow of the poem, I think, is not very organized but then again, the words and feeling expressed covers up for that. I loved the ...

thanx for the help.

Obviously much inspired by Mr. Dan Brown and his books. Anyway, well done and words very well chosen. Loved the little verse-a mind-blowing thought.

thank you and for being so unnaturally nice i won't call you you-know-what!! thanx again. you even saw my illustrations to this poem. what do you think of them??

thank you. yeah, i missed the 'halt'.

i want to ask a question: which edition of Hp Phoenix is your sis reading? otherwise, this esay was really professional-like and formal. good too.