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Forever Isn't Long Enough

by Heather_BlackCain


Forever Isn’t Long Enough

Tell me why you’re here,
And then I’ll disappear.

It took awhile for me to see,
Why you always prayed for me.

Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to scream at you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.

Tell me why I’m here,
But then I’ll disappear.

It took awhile for me to see,
Why the nicest hated me.

Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to cry with you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.


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Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:31 pm
armonia says...



I liked it, it was good. thought i too got lost in some places.




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Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:48 am
Shine says...



That was preety good,Well done.

Keep writing.:)




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Mon Sep 04, 2006 6:21 am
Sohini says...



i found this a bit confusing but i liked the way the words are used!





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