Published September 4, 2006
Forever Isn’t Long Enough
Tell me why you’re here,
And then I’ll disappear.
It took awhile for me to see,
Why you always prayed for me.
Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to scream at you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.
Tell me why I’m here,
But then I’ll disappear.
It took awhile for me to see,
Why the nicest hated me.
Forever isn’t long enough,
For me to cry with you,
But just…
Don’t ask me why I do.
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I liked it, it was good. thought i too got lost in some places.
That was preety good,Well done.
Keep writing.
i found this a bit confusing but i liked the way the words are used!