Sohini

coola nd very moving. i love this short and thoughful work.

chapter 15?? anyway, a lovely poem and great words. i loved this line "worry not, sand is more precious than stars. "

*offers a large yellow coughdrop* really weird, really cool , really simple.

really helpful crit Gryfalcon. and thanks for appreciating. you too lampshade; thanks.

that is sooo sweet and cheerful. the rhythm is very well done too. i loved these lines "Maidens blush and lovers long And new love and life are found." *hands ...

I just read "Men at Arms" (thanks to Jojo) i think it was awesomely amusing-what a grand writing style. i love Pratchett's humour and i want to read more

short and sweet work there,GL77. i love your avie. meow and rebeak to your story. good job with the word selection. the beginning line is amazing!

good poem, nice flow, the bitter mood is spilling out-i love this! only, i think you shoul break this long line "Since in the six months that you've been gone ...

nice , flowing poem and truly romantic! maybe you could shorten any syllable from the last line for better flow?

Snoink darling, thanks sooo much! *hugs Snoink* *gives her a cat dressed in a piggy costume* that really will help a lot with my illustrations too!

so this is Russian? do you know more of this legend Bjorn? could you tell me?

err..there seems to be something quitewrong with the flow of this poem. the first two lines make no sense to me. explain them please. the last line rocks!

ahh... fanks sphoink * eating potato chips at the moment* *offers one to all *

wow that was touchy and you wrote with much feeling. the word are simple and i love the way the poem flows

THANK YE ALL FOR APPRECIATING. i'll have to work on my punctuation skill, thanks Luck flower. i need advice:hare in the line- "So, the King was furious" for better flow ...