Published September 24, 2006
Someone special left us,
She died and flew away.
She left her footprints on me,
And forever they shall stay.
A gorgeous smile apon her
Filled all our hearts with joy.
She had that special something
That no one could destroy.
She pumped my heart with feelings
No others could truly share.
As a best friend she was brilliant
And for always she'll be there.
Someone special has left us,
She died and flew away.
She left her footprints on us,
And forever they shall stay.
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Loved it! As others have said, no crit. Simple and sweet. I like, I like!
Wiggy
It made me want to cry. I can feel the emotion in it and know it must be about a real person. I loved it. No crit.
wow that was touchy and you wrote with much feeling. the word are simple and i love the way the poem flows
How can i put this...LOOOVVEEE IT! Thats all there is to it
Gorgeous. Is it about a girl who died? Because it reminded me of a girl from my school who died two years ago at 16. Very touching though. Great piece.