Sohini

Great piece of work. The narration is smooth and your well chosen word conjure up an interesting atmosphere.

You forgot to put in the punctuation! NO poem is complete without it. But the poem was rather childish, you know,not much depth to it. And it also seemed a ...

This is one very nice lyric poem. Absolutely lyrical. Smooth and nice. The narration is impressive. But, I could not get the the connection of the poem with its title.

Neat poem, very original. Brad makes it even better.

Hey, this is very rhythmatic, makes me want to put a neat beat to it and make it a marching song. This must be a special poem to you both...very ...

No offence, but the whole thing just went over my head. A little explaination, perhaps?

Hmm, thanks for the info Shade...*waits for book 3 and 4* As for Hp, I wrote this thread at least 2 years back I think, so times have changed...A Lot. ...

That is so sweet. This is definitely the cutest poem I've read. Gives a new perspective too snowdrops. How you could bring such a true yet wonderous message in so ...

Awesome poem. Very fresh in theme and style. This poem really heightens my imagination and I liked how you've caprured the transformayion action.

Grand Poem , Ed. I loved this . All of it. The title needs to be praised especially and your style is very good. The feelings have been brought out ...

This poem is more of a chant, yes. But, it's a creepy one that aroused fear in you. I like the usage of words and the first lines are very ...

Stephen Fry's "The Liar"...I couldn't even finish it. Parody of HP, "Barry Trotter..." this was wierd for me too.

A cute poem with a Halloween feel about it. Enjoyed the conclusion.

That is a really short, simple and a nice poem. I like the way you've used imagery and the dynamic nature of your verses. Keep Writing!

I am in love with Bartimaeus. Any more questions?