Silent Tears.
Are tears that come unwanted.
They show the suffering.
Silent Tears.
Come every waking moment
They fall for perseverance.
Silent Tears.
Come because they erase the pain
That is in my life.
They become apart of everyday life.
The tears keep coming,
They won't stop!
They keep flowing!
Now they leave behind
The marks of pain.
That is not understood,
But leaves behind unwanted scars.
Unwanted scars of silent tears.
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hmm i could imagine that being a song...
but there wasn't really much about it that blew me away. it was okay, but next time really try to make your lines flow.
You forgot to put in the punctuation!
NO poem is complete without it.
But the poem was rather childish, you know,not much depth to it.
And it also seemed a tad forced.
A good attempt none the less.
I thought it wasn't too bad, just space it out a bit please.