Sohini

There is a grammatical error in the line : “are all that life has offer,”-this should either be “are all that life has to offer,” or “are all that life ...

It was CRAZY boring.i found this piece of writing very casual and there was absolutrely no depth iin it. One more thing; I think you should know that there is ...

A good poem though of quite a common theme. I think some lines are a bit too long like,: “And how we'll meet again and how you will always love ...

Excellent…absolutely marvelous. I really like this kind of strange and unique writing and you did a wonderful job. I think the first paragraph was the best part of the entire ...

I found this weird…very weird. Is there more to this? Anyway the description was really lively and the helplessness of the girl was realistically expressed. I loved this: “It was ...

Wow this piece was absolutely fantastic. I loved the way you made the funeral scene so lively in a unique and great way. There was an enchanting flow in it. ...

Splendid poem!! I loved it though I didn’t quite understand it to a great extent. I suppose there’s much between the lines but I couldn’t get them. Your writing style ...

I found this story –how shall I put it-simple-quite simple. Anyway, you did a fine job by making this simple plot very realistic and lively. I’d like to point out ...

Err…this is a very different kind of theme and I enjoyed reading it. Your writing style is really unusual but it appeals me a whale lot. In the 2nd paragraph, ...

Poetic…very poetic. This poem is wonderful A bit more punctuation wouldn’t hurt-you can add some to make it better. Shouldn’t some sentences begin with a capital letter-especially at the beginni

the poem is ... unexpectedly good. er..there are 2 minor mistakes:"Unexpected, there you was infront of me "should be "Unexpected, there you were infront of me" and "too bad your ...

It’s huge!!! Congratulations on writing such a big poem. I liked it and I admire your rhyming skill greatly- you rhymed all the way till the end!! The 3rd line-“There’s ...

I hate to be rude and I really hate to be rude but I think I’ve got no other option. Is this a story?? If yes; where on Jupiter is ...

A wonderful poem. Very imaginative and thoughtfully written. But you’ve not rhymed these lines: “He brought his men to the forest land, there Robin Hood met his foe again. He ...

Awesome!!! Remarkable ideas!!! Incredible writing style!!! A fascinating story. I absolutely loved it. Great description skills. I’m amazed at this short and more than just sweet story. You’ve mis