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My Road
Here I am, alone I walk
Down roads of rocks and ice.
There’s no one here with which to talk
They left after giving advice.
The wind bitter and cold
Freezes the tears on my cheek.
Such miseries mine as never told.
I crumple on the ground so weak.
What’s the point of going on?
I’ve lost my very last friend.
Everything I live for is gone.
Let my life come to its end.
Confused and empty inside,
I feel nothing but pain.
I wish for warm arms in which to hide
But cold and alone I remain.
My friends said they’d be here
For me when I fell
But cold, darkness, and rain bring fear,
They ran. I’m on my own in this hell.
Look into my eyes, read my fate:
To die. A broken lonely wretch.
Take me from this world of hate.
My arms upward I stretch.
Raise me up on gentle hands,
Lift me to the light.
Help me on my own feet to stand,
Point me to the right.
I’ve been fighting so long.
I can’t give up now.
Maybe I’m wrong
But I'll keep trying somehow.
Though I’m lonely and cold,
Out in bitter wind and rain,
Eyes full of pain untold,
I’m going to try again.
Maybe I’ll make it, maybe not.
It’s doubly hard on your own,
But I’ll give it all I’ve got
Until I make it home.
And in my grave with battles done
I’ll feel cold no more.
Over pain I will have won.
Resting with those gone before.
I’m sorry that life has been this way
With pain, wind, rain and cold.
Walking alone day after day
Eyes tear filled and old.
Reach out your hand to those
Who, like me, tread along this road
Before its too late and their eyes they close
Help them with their heavy load.
No one can reach the end without
Someone to lend a hand.
It’s too late for me there is no doubt
But help those left to stand.
Don’t let them fall into this place
Where no one can survive
Where nightmares round your head do chase...
You don’t even want to stay alive.
Down here in hell it is too late
The strongest hand can’t lift me out
I’m left alone to my awful fate
Of life and love without.
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