Sohini

Wow, this is the first shap poem I'm reading and boy is this exciting!! Well done, I enjoyed the small phrases cum lines they give a quick rhythm to th ...

This poem was moving and mighty realistic. I loved the idea and there's strenght in your style.I am unable to point out any mistakes other than the 'gnaws at her ...

Yeah, I loved iot too. although i didn't like the epilogue I think it was way better without it. it was funny but well, it kinda spoils the mood. I ...

Well, the poem is more of sentences than verses. I think you should work on making the line shorter so that they can be read with ease. The length of ...

Firstly: Please break up the lines, such monstrously long lines don’t suit a poem and are an eyesore. And in these lines: “No walls...just! Eternal nothingness- a tormenting prison.” Shouldn’t

So, is this poem about a triple Siamese/conjoined twin? I didn’t get that. Also, the poem’s quite repetitive and way too short to convey it’s meaning clearly. You should elaborate ...

Yes, Mark Haddon wrote this book so very movingly. It is grand. It’s funny thing that the plot isn’t very complicated but the readers are captivated by the unique narration ...

This is one of the greatest Nature poems I have read here till date. I am moved. :) The use of imagery is beautiful and the way you have managed ...

The poem was good. the theme was a bit old do but I liked the boy laments in the beginning and then moves on. I feel that the poem's sturcture ...

althopugh it seems pretty romantic from the surface, this poem hasn't got much depth in it. It's short n' sweet but that's all there is to it. And please put ...

I completely agree withShadow Twit. Your poem really nees more revision, more matter, more punctuations, capital letters and more sense to it. you are just dragging the same thing over ...

[b]The Bartimaeus Trilogy[/b] [b]A Series of Unfortunate Events[/b] Charlotte's Web [b]The Hobbbit [/b] Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaben CHarlie and the CHocolate Factory [b]The BFG [/b] [b]A

I'm reading book 1 currently and boy daoes it rock!!! Yeah Stroud! he's soo funny. i adore Bartimaus. he's always ironical. and did anyone notice how grandly and precisely Stroud ...

tHe Bfg is definately my cuppa tea. where else do you come across whizzpoppers *nasty grin*. i've read almost all his children's books and i loved his autobiographies—Boy Days of ...

Congratualations on writing your very first poem and a modest one too! before you know it, you won't be able to drink water before you scribble a couple of verses. ...