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Re: Malala
This is great! I've read a bit of "I Am Malala" and I've seen the "He Named Me Malala" documentary as well, I really think every American kid should read ...
May 6, 2017 -
Re: One Huge Decision
Wow! This is a great piece. Great storytelling. Proof that the best writing always comes from personal experience. I think your voice has a good balance of being clear and ...
Oct 25, 2016 -
Re: Just the start
Hey There! Sofie here with a review! First off, kudos on posting a piece after not having written for a while. It can be tough to put your stuff out ...
Oct 25, 2016 -
Re: She Is
Hey there! Sofie here for a review :) First off, really great job on this! I enjoyed this story very much! Right from the beginning, you grabbed my attention and ...
Oct 25, 2016 -
Re: Curtain Call
Hey! Sofie Here to review this great piece :) First off, you did a great job with the beginning. It hooks you in and really makes you want to keep ...
Oct 25, 2016 -
Re: a good argument
Hey! Sofie here with another review :) Ahhhhhhhhhh, I want to be constructive and provide helpful criticism but I can't because oh man I relate to this sooooooooo much. This ...
Oct 10, 2016 -
Re: Checkmate
Hey there! Sofie here with another review :) Wow. This whole concept is so original and different than anything else I've read on this site. It really hooks you in ...
Oct 10, 2016 -
Re: The Plan (intro)
Hey! Sofie here with another review :) First off, great job! You have a really strong voice and I like your writing style. I think it's simple and to the ...
Oct 10, 2016 -
Re: Memory
Sofie here with a review! Wow. Great job, I definitely didn't see than ending coming! I think you portrayed the brother and sister dynamic beautifully. You also have a really ...
Sep 26, 2016 -
Re: Life as a Leaf
Yo, Sofie here with a review! Well, I definitely never thought I'd ever get emotional about a leaf, but here we are. This was super heartfelt and something about the ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Do You Remember
Hey! Sofie here with a review :) First off, this was a really great piece. You have a really distinct voice that's super poetic and has a really nice flow. ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: The Brooklyn Heist
Hey there! SofieR here to review this great piece :) First, I really like how we hit the ground running and begin right in the middle of the action. That ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
What's up, Ero? Sofie here to review chapter two :) I really like where the story's going! You're really good at characterization and giving each character their own individual voice. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: First Day Catastrophe
This is great! It had my attention from the start. It's important to have LGBTQ representation like this, I wish there was more of it out there. I'd definitely read ...
Jun 24, 2016 -
Re: The Countdown
This was great! It kind of reminds me of "The Martian". You really know how to grip the reader's attention. Watching the tone go from so hopeful and excited to ...
Jun 24, 2016
