Snoweary

This is utterly a beautiful piece of poem. Although it's a short poem, it tells the pain the writer's wrote. I'm sure, a lot of people feel the same (as ...

Hello there! Uhh, yeah you really should work on the punctuation :D But overall, i honestly like your poem very much. When you wrote; I would for you would be ...

Hey there :D. C00l!! i totally love the wording. I am not perfect in grammar so i am not going to talk about it :D In my opinion, the message ...

hi there :D I read this poem when it is raining outside. It is beautiful when the rain is gentle. :D well, i love your poem. the Verses is quite ...

Hey xhellysmx :D I am no pro in poetry but honestly i love this poem. “Are you okay? Will you be just fine?” But none of them never really wanted ...

Cool! I totally love your work. Though i am not sure if The Knight of the Round Table existed in Socrates' era. Every little details you put in the story ...

Hey there Shinobiinfinity :D Wow, i love your story. Usually i won't read short stories unless it caught my attention. You have created a character that typical in detective stories ...

Hey there, Cool. I like your poem. Maybe I've lost my magic, grown beyond the friendship of a pen; I love this part the most. I think the flow of ...

Hi there QueenJen! Welcome to YWS and wow, i love your work. Lovely. Simply great and I love every bit of it. I am not going to touch on grammar ...

Well, i love the theory of evolution. First of all, Billions of years have been passed since the formation of this magnificent universe. I prefer it to read, Billions of ...

Your words described the pain and sorrow you had experience. I super love your work! I feel connected to the story. Though we can never put the best words to ...

Well, i always love stories about vampires. :D Through your story, i spotted several sentences that doesn't come out right. I sighed, picking up the tray and leaving the room. ...

So, i did clicked the link to read Head in the Clouds and proceed to read your story.I have to admit that i love it. It feels like you are ...

Generally, this story is nicely written. The flow is easy to follow and i enjoy reading it. I can see the bond and love between you and the puppy which ...

I am not going to touch on grammar or wording as it is my major problem in writing. :D I enjoy this poem. One thing i love about your poem ...