SnowGhost

Thanks. My phone was about to run out of battery so I didn't have enough time to edit it sorry

I understand that thanks. Your review really helped

Thank you. God bless

thanks

thank you very much. i will take your suggestions into consideration.

This is a great poem. It is funny unique and original. I am picturing this in a children's book with illustrations. I especially like the part at the end "I ...

Good job! And congratulations on your first piece.

Good job! I like your writing style. You don't waste your time on excess detail that would lose my attention but you leave the readers imagination to fill in the ...

It sounds good read as a rap

Great. I liked how profound the loving relationship between Joan and her brother was.

Yes please!

Very good. I can't wait for more!

Nice! Black out poetry is so much fun.

Good job. It held my attention the whole time. I liked how you made Mathew react to his annoying customer and the clever way he dissolved the situation. I also ...

I personally​ like this one better then In the Passion of Love but they both are really good. Good job.