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NEVER HAVE A TITLE LIKE THAT. It's irritating. Put your poem title in the topic name.

LOL. I remember our first face-off... postmodernism. XD Fun times, fun times... My criticism goes as follows:

Okay! I've been playing around with the themes/skins/whatever and I changed two. Not much, mind you, just the fonts. I changed Red Roses, mostly because I was unhappy with the ...

:D For me, pretty good is just as good as it gets. The only higher stage is, "Awesome."

Yep... you're right. :P I tried to make it sound okay though! Coincidentally, the next song I wrote was "I HATE POETRY."

Semicolons do work, but I would rather have fragments in this piece. I have read it over, and so far so good, but I'll probably end up doing the critique ...

XD Oh, this was funny! I love your advice to poets... and it was written in such a pretentious manner that it ended up making fun of the pretentiousness in ...

Oh no... they're two different parts. The Spanish is very simple and is pleading for help in a childlike manner and the English is being wishy-washy about it, looking over ...

Maybe you can post the sheet music? ^___^ And... you watched Phantom of the Opera way too much...

Lol! Stupid? Hardly my intention! The main problem with derivatives is that it's a fancy way of saying a slope of a tangent line. Which makes you wonder... but it's ...

Ooo... I love these poems! My favorite is the first one (very clever, made me smile) but the second one is cool too. But the first one... awesomeness.

I like the title. And the poem. It reminds me of some Beatles music... "A Day in the Life"... *salivates* Translation: Me gusta mucho.

Oh, come on Bobo! His voice is cracked. Didn't it ever occur to you that there was a logical reason for that? Lay off the caps and italics, man. Not ...

Hehehe... were you refering to the neon one? That was on the other site. ^_^

Once more, you have some cool stuff. The plot, so far, is interesting (I can't help but to think Tamora Pierce when I read it...) and I would like to ...