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I mean, I'm sure there are stories of monsters in the mountains prior to this mysterious figure, lol. You don't have to be accurate -- in fact, I would suggest ...

Okay so... some thoughts if you want to do this... If you wanted to nix the mysterious figure, but still wanted to have the foreshadowing, you can do a number ...

WHAT HAVE I DONE????

WAIT WHAT. this actually something to celebrate??? I think having a turnip exploding would be actually quite Bad. Like, can the turnip come back or is it... gone forever??? Why ...

I'm not sure what you mean by word count budget honestly? My (heavily revised/polished) chapters are generally about 4k long, but I've stretched it longer if I feel like I ...

Oh whoops! I was rereading your review to make my newest revision (in my master copy...) fixed some of your comments, and I realized I didn't respond! Anyway, thank you ...

Oh hi, Messenger! :) Oooh Alainna if only.you knew the words you spoke. Honesty, this line only gets funnier after Book 2. XD I looked at the version versus the ...

Oof, thanks for finding that missing word! I am so GUILTY of those. XD Also, good spot on the paragraph... I think I originally split them up because they were ...

Oope lemme take care of that for you! :)

A quick note! I revised this chapter on February 13, 2026! (I changed the title, moved a scene that used to be in chapter 1 here, and trimmed A LOT ...

Hi! :) I'm testing out the beginning... if you're reading this, I want to know... 1. If you finished reading. 2. If you didn't finish reading, where did you stop? ...

Just as a quick note!!! This was (unfortunately) written in 2005, which was four years before Lady Gaga released her song, "Telephone."

Thank you! They always looked wrong to me and I was never sure why. But also, I didn't know if I could play with the grammar without invalidating everything else. ...

Wait, but who does she hurt? George or Gavin? Or both? I need to know!

AHHHH thank you for the review!