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  • Short Story » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: DRAFT: children's picture book

    Hi! Okay... I am going to be honest. I have no idea what age this book is intended for. I have six children, ages 1-10, and I can tell you ...

    Oct 28, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: The Salesman and The Crockpot

    OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO THIS WAS SO MUCH WORSE THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE. LIKE. I knew this was horror going in! I knew something ...

    Oct 17, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Receive a letter

    OH. OH. The creepy letters are about MURDER!!!!! So Mr. Hauker... aka Ballrog, aka the Hawk, was being targeted and Zephir is the wren and Arella is the... lizard? Also, ...

    Oct 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: ever since we founded rome

    Hmmmm... Rome is a very special place to me so of course I had to read this poem and see what angle you were approaching with this poem. Were you ...

    Oct 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: teaching notes

    Ahhhh! I love this. :) I love the format too. Now, I'm not a teacher, so I'm not sure exactly what teaching notes look like. However, when I first sat ...

    Oct 13, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Supernatural Re: The Thorns I Swallowed

    ...okay, this might sound bad, but I swear I'm getting Trolls 2 vibes from this. It has the whole plants turning against humanity and taking over vibes. Except... well... Trolls ...

    Oct 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Not Good At Goobyes

    Oh no! I expected a sad story, but this was really sad. :( I kind of expected that the grandma would die from natural causes and then the narrator and ...

    Oct 12, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Meadow's Aster: Chapter One: The Lepidopteran's Law

    OMG. A story featuring a sociopathic butterfly murderess? XD Like... is it even possible for a butterfly to murder? Do they have any way to kill each other? That part ...

    Sep 29, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Love that Swallows Me Whole

    Oy, this reminds me of something I could have written when I was reeling with post partum depression... like, logically, I know that infancy eventually ends and things get better ...

    Sep 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: leaking through the floorboards

    Hello! :) the water leaked through the floorboards, you can't convince me i'm lying this time. knee deep in water, you threw a dishcloth at me, screamed that i should ...

    Sep 18, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: we can never be friends (an ode to a banana)

    Ahhhhhh. I love this poem. It's awesome. I love the visceral image of eating through the banana's flesh, as if to personify the banana, so the whole thing seems like ...

    Sep 18, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Eternal My Muse

    Oh my goodness! When I read this, I was like, "HMMM. This looks like this is a poem that one would find in a novel." Only for me to glance ...

    Sep 18, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ones Who Saved Me

    Hiiiiiiiii! I'm here to review. And, since I'm not mentioned in the poem, that means I'm an unbiased source that you can trust... maybe? I dunno. XD In any case, ...

    Sep 11, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Solstice- Chapter 1- The Last Abnormality

    Hi! It's me again, here to look at your story that does not involve chickens. XD Okay... I admit, this family is completely messed up. Princess Valerie is like, "I ...

    Jul 31, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Chickens Re: A Storm of Flames And Feathers- Chap 1 (rough draft)- Isamu's 100th fight

    I cannot express how awesome this story is. It is amazing. Well written and so original. I love it! The first couple of lines got me hooked. I looooove swans. ...

    Jul 31, 2024


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