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Re: DRAFT: children's picture book
Hi! Okay... I am going to be honest. I have no idea what age this book is intended for. I have six children, ages 1-10, and I can tell you ...
Oct 28, 2024 -
Re: The Salesman and The Crockpot
OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO THIS WAS SO MUCH WORSE THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE. LIKE. I knew this was horror going in! I knew something ...
Oct 17, 2024 -
Re: Receive a letter
OH. OH. The creepy letters are about MURDER!!!!! So Mr. Hauker... aka Ballrog, aka the Hawk, was being targeted and Zephir is the wren and Arella is the... lizard? Also, ...
Oct 14, 2024 -
Re: ever since we founded rome
Hmmmm... Rome is a very special place to me so of course I had to read this poem and see what angle you were approaching with this poem. Were you ...
Oct 14, 2024 -
Re: teaching notes
Ahhhh! I love this. :) I love the format too. Now, I'm not a teacher, so I'm not sure exactly what teaching notes look like. However, when I first sat ...
Oct 13, 2024 -
Re: The Thorns I Swallowed
...okay, this might sound bad, but I swear I'm getting Trolls 2 vibes from this. It has the whole plants turning against humanity and taking over vibes. Except... well... Trolls ...
Oct 12, 2024 -
Re: Not Good At Goobyes
Oh no! I expected a sad story, but this was really sad. :( I kind of expected that the grandma would die from natural causes and then the narrator and ...
Oct 12, 2024 -
Re: Meadow's Aster: Chapter One: The Lepidopteran's Law
OMG. A story featuring a sociopathic butterfly murderess? XD Like... is it even possible for a butterfly to murder? Do they have any way to kill each other? That part ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: A Love that Swallows Me Whole
Oy, this reminds me of something I could have written when I was reeling with post partum depression... like, logically, I know that infancy eventually ends and things get better ...
Sep 22, 2024 -
Re: leaking through the floorboards
Hello! :) the water leaked through the floorboards, you can't convince me i'm lying this time. knee deep in water, you threw a dishcloth at me, screamed that i should ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: we can never be friends (an ode to a banana)
Ahhhhhh. I love this poem. It's awesome. I love the visceral image of eating through the banana's flesh, as if to personify the banana, so the whole thing seems like ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: Eternal My Muse
Oh my goodness! When I read this, I was like, "HMMM. This looks like this is a poem that one would find in a novel." Only for me to glance ...
Sep 18, 2024 -
Re: The Ones Who Saved Me
Hiiiiiiiii! I'm here to review. And, since I'm not mentioned in the poem, that means I'm an unbiased source that you can trust... maybe? I dunno. XD In any case, ...
Sep 11, 2024 -
Re: Solstice- Chapter 1- The Last Abnormality
Hi! It's me again, here to look at your story that does not involve chickens. XD Okay... I admit, this family is completely messed up. Princess Valerie is like, "I ...
Jul 31, 2024 -
Re: A Storm of Flames And Feathers- Chap 1 (rough draft)- Isamu's 100th fight
I cannot express how awesome this story is. It is amazing. Well written and so original. I love it! The first couple of lines got me hooked. I looooove swans. ...
Jul 31, 2024
