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Re: A Potion to Make You Smarter
Hi Veeren! I just wanted to pop on by and look at your poem for you. :) So! This is a kind of… odd poem! And, I really don’t think ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Mountain (Ch. 1)
Hi Cspr! I am going to just dive right in, if you don’t mind. The Mountain looked as it always did. That is, it looked totally different today than it ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: *Untitled*
Hey Robert! I am sorry that you feel this way. When I was reading this work, I was hoping that it was fictional, and by the time I was finished ...
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Re: Sister
Hi Suvayan! First of all: AWWWWWWWW! This is kind of adorable. I am sure your sister loved it, if you showed her it. :) Now! Because something which is awesome ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: To Gyani Maiyi Sen
Hi MaKriege! First of all, what a wonderful way to pay tribute to a wonderful person! Poetry is what has made many wonderful people immortal, and I am glad to ...
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Re: Sacred
Hey lilchoma! I just wanted to stop by and tell you that I really liked your poem and its way of criticizing warfare. In particular, I love how it dives ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Candles
Fahrvergnügen! Okay… now that this essential part of the review is over and done with… your story! :) First of all… Valentine’s Day! When you said it was set in ...
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Re: candy man
…Oh, non-disclosure agreements! What bothersome things. They take away the ending of what is more than likely a very riveting tale. In any case, this was amusing. An uptight businessman, ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: When I Close My Eyes
AwesomeSauce! I love your name! It is awesomesauce! :D Okay, okay… enough fooling around! Your story! I liked the setting that you had created! It was clear and I could ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: We Are Painting Men
Hi Emma! Oh my goodness! This is so beautiful. It’s too bad it hasn’t been read more. I had to read it several times to get many of the complexities ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Tree Resurrected
Hi niteowl! I think I am getting addicted to your poetry. This is a good thing. ANYWAY. I looooove this poem. Did you know that we used to have orchards ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Steps
Hi niteowl! You told us we could bug you about your poems so… here I am! :) This is a kind of sad poem, actually, because you first descriptions of ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Death
Hi Kyla! I told you that I would come, didn’t I? ;) Anyway! I really do like the subject of this poem! I have always kind of had a morbid ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Mind of a Sinner
Hey kazzykay! Welcome to YWS! :D Okay! So, obviously I looked at your poem! Ouch! I never quite understood cutting. That is, I know why people do it, but I ...
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Re: Heavenly
First of all… hi Ariana! Welcome to YWS. Mind you, you’ve been here for nearly a month now, but I am clearly a horrible person and have thus not welcomed ...
Feb 24, 2013
