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I found it a little clichéd and soppy... but then, that might be good for your mission! At least it's not death poetry. Moving on! A mother is someone to ...

This seems a little nonsensical, but only because I'm not sure what a runway is, or what it would be considered in England, etc. So... um... help? However, I do ...

I like the first stanza the best because it's quick and short. Then the lines get longer. It seems a little bit more clumsily written... like you're going to a ...

I... um... have a confession. I was surprised at the ending. I didn't know she was murdered, etc. Which really scares me because the YWS folks seemed to know it ...

Er... does it have to do with "she"? I think it's really really abstract right now. I, personally, would like more details, because I'm at a loss of what you're ...

"Through a stained-glass window." I think this seems a little short... I would expand on it for just a little bit, maybe one more line. But, once again, you have ...

SEE? What did I tell you! *grumbles* Trying to hide your talent away... As someone who does her best to grow roses, I thought it was cool. It's funny how ...

XD I thought I had read this, but noooo... I liked this a lot. The meaning, etc. was so... poignant that it reminded me at once of those who live ...

Ha! I'm reading a necromanced topic! *does a dance* No, but seriously, the description is pretty at times, but sometimes it's overwhelmingly beautiful and it makes me want to reach ...

Oh dear... I feel like I'm getting more apathetic each day. This hardly did anything for me. :( But still... Why don't you send it to him anyway, just for ...

Ha! I liked this. This could easily be made into a depressing poem, but you didn't do that! Instead, check this out: i have always imagined nights like that: side ...

Hehe, a wounded congregation. Quite an interesting thought -- usually poets make it seem like the congregation is perfect and all holy, when in fact it can be quite the ...

Ooo, these remind me of the examples they use to show how "meaningful" a haiku can be. I especially like the second one, mostly because it has to do with ...

Reminds me of the show, "Lonely Planet" which has since been called "Globetrekkers." Basically? See the world! Yeah.. The images were interesting. I have no idea about the meaning of ...

Checking back on your old poems, eh? ;) I like the other one better. It was a lot more descriptive. This seems to be an effort for a rhyming poem, ...