Published December 23, 2005
The cat and the mongoose went sailing on a boat
They were balming each other for not bringing a coat
The boat ran aground
But none of them drowned
Because the sea had turned into a moat!!
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Brilliant! Exraorinary!! Fantastic! Humor! It made my lauph, it made me cy. I was amused. Reminds me of the peom about the owl and the pussy cat.
Yay! A limerick.
I would suggest taking out the exclamation marks at the end, because they make the piece sound a little bit too enthusiastic, and it ends up sounds too hyper. A period, or even one exclamation mark, is fine.
Cool! I hate wearing coats.
Haha, cool.
Limericks are fun.
Fun. Short and sweet! I liked it. TBR forced me to comment and read this... <____<; so I have no idea what to say because I suck when it comes to poems and limericks.
Oh my God!
This was hilarious!
I have never read such a lovely limerick... not even that one about the man from Peru or the one about the Wendy's clown!
I liked this a lot! Good work! (Of course I'm a nerd) This was childish in a good way!