Ha! I liked this. This could easily be made into a depressing poem, but you didn't do that! Instead, check this out:
i have always imagined
nights like that:
side splitting
tear bringing
earth shaking
fun.
I love the last line of that stanza! It could be so many other words, but the word "fun" gives it a mischievous sound to it, a playful tone, which sets up the poem quite nicely.
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