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Hi, darkknight! I am going to be annoying and point out a grammar error, because I am totally a prose writer like that! There's a beautiful things

Hey Wonder! :) I suppose dawn is drab, but then again, twilight is also drab! However, there is sunrise, just as there is sunset, and sunrise can be startling beautiful. ...

Yay! I love happy endings! Happy endings to drug abuse stories make me even happier! After all, who wouldn't want to have a successful recovery? This is a good thing! ...

I don't know if you did this on purpose to allude to the poem that is on the front page, but you misspelled Shepherd like that person did, which is ...

Hi lostthought! First of all, welcome to YWS! So, this seems to be a prelude to something. After all, it's kind of a vague poem that seems to be leading ...

Hi Malachi! Yay! Psalm 23! You really can't go wrong with that. It is one of my favorite psalms! One thing that I thought was a bit odd... is this ...

Hi Road! Looking at this poem... I don't think you've really captured what a temple really is? Judging by what you laid out, this could be a structure from a ...

SO. I was thinking just now... and I know I just gave you a review and everything, but I thought of something else that I wanted to tell you, and ...

Hi Carina! So, Grif pointed out this story to me, since he is my twin brother, and he wanted to brag that he made an awesome review. So, in the ...

Niteowl. I am really, really not hungry because I had a huge lunch. Like, I am not even sure how I ate that much (except that it was friggin' decision). ...

...can I like this poem? Where is the like button, even... oh! Okay. *liked* SO. I liked this. Of course, I also like crappy romance novels that have this same ...

Hi Nats! Okay! So... the story. I like it! It's kind of cute and kind of creepy and the relationship between the two siblings amuses me. Poor, poor Cassie, lol. ...

Hi anirban! So, you asked me to give you a critique. So, here I am! My favorite lines of the poem were actually the first two lines. I love the ...

Ugh. What a woman is right. She’s kind of evil and I dislike her greatly. I mean. Yeah, Vincent knows her sensitive spots. But, he kind of uses her and ...

Hey SmileWithoutRegret! Sorry for missing this the first time! Still, better late than never, right? :) One thing that struck me while reading this piece was how… sex-centered it is. ...