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This is going to be a very quick and dirty grammar check, since the grammar mistakes bug me, and because Drak might be interested in correcting them. Actually, I lied! ...

The first two lines were fantastic, because it displayed the full range of emotions for camels... the harsh work they undergo out of love for us humans, how utterly timeless ...

I have probably sold my soul several times, with regards to not reading the terms and conditions. But that's okay. I think... Still! I am going to point out that ...

SO. If a guy who I was dating after I had a series of serious relationships was stroking my leg during dinner, and I wasn't interested at all in him ...

I actually liked this better than your other story! Your other story was just about a seemingly perfect girl who supposedly had trouble in her life... but what sort of ...

One thing that I noticed... you start talking about believers of any religion in your thesis, and then you only speak about Islam and Christianity. You do mention Judaism in ...

YES. Thank you for writing this! I like the subtlety of it all... though it's not too subtle. ;) My only comment is that their heartbeat starts at 6 weeks ...

Hi! So, I read the poem several times, and my general impressions? First of all, it's a little bit too long. Perhaps you were going for the whole making it ...

Hi Strange! So. On one hand, I kind of want to praise you for not having the typical angsty break-up poem about how you want to get back with your ...

Oh dear. XD I would like to point out three things that are a bit odd to me! One is a bit awkward... uh... yeah... so, begin! I've tried so ...

Hi KnightTeen! So, you're a lot braver than I am! I am hesitant to post up my story I've been working on for the past month, let alone something that ...

Hi! I did say I would be back, didn't I? ;) I know you're trying to ease the transition from the bus to the Ribbon with a new chapter, but ...

Hi InuRa! First of all, welcome to YWS! :) Maybe this is just because I haven't read the rest of your story yet, but I think it's pretty exciting to ...

Woohoo! Back in the day, poets used to bounce back and forth on each other's poems and to mention them casually in their poem so that there were tons of ...

Hi Fiend! Wow, this piece has certainly got tons of reviews! It's probably a nice feeling to have all these people post thoughts and whatnot on your work... even though ...